On my knees

by lost and lonely nevermore   Apr 27, 2007


On my knees before you
bleeding from every pore
excruciating pain
cant take this any more

on my knees before you
i give my life freely
i bend to your will
but I'm dying to be me

on my knees before you
i slowly crawl away
you reach for me
but i manage to live another day

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  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    That was good, i could feel the excrutiating pain in this poem, maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    You really did a good job my favorite stanza was
    on my knees before you
    i give my life freely
    i bend to your will
    but i'm dying to be me
    love it keep it up 5/5

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