An eye for an eye

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 27, 2007


You can throw a fist,
I can throw one too,
but in the end what will it do?

Fill my heart with hate
Fill me up with pain and in the end I hope you'll see that an eye for an eye makes us blind.

Bring strife into life
Bring more pain too
I know its what you want
because thats what you do.

You cant solve the problem
You only bring more about.

So I hope you learn that
An eye for an eye makes us blind.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DrowningDreams

    Woww, this peom is awesome!
    Its very emotional
    and the words are very strong!
    i like it xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sylvia

    So true! Keep writing... you're awesome!

    *Sylvia*

  • 17 years ago

    by Hate

    WOW ummm ur poems are much better then mine ther relly hot+cc+

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Loved it. :D Especially the meaning. Keep it up, hun. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was a very good poem, true and it flowed good. But I think this Stanza:

    "Fill my heart with hate
    Fill me up with pain and in the end I hope you'll see that an eye for an eye makes us blind."

    The last line was a bit too long for the flow of the poem. Break it up....I'm pretty sure they've ^^^ already told you, but anyways very well written, keep it up!!

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