Hey this was a very good poem keep up the good work um no it didn't happen to me it happen to a friend nut still thank you for comminting on my poem k
love always Teesh xXx...

I loved your poem. I thought it had truth and real emotion to it. I hope you keep writing and u come comment my poems sometime.

~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~~

I like this A LOT. its very well written and i just love it. nice :]

how could i not see beyond,
that evil pretty boy face
how could i laugh with you
you were covered with hidden disgrace

how could i fall in love
with a guy nothing more than a kid
how could i ever forgive you
the are still left from what you did

^^ thats my favorite part by the way. thanks for commenting me

xo,
Beth

I'm afraid there will be many fairy tale myths in your life before you will finally find your own prince charming. But don't give up, the one you seek is out there, just protect your heart and dream!!! Great poem. Hugs from Doug!

Sad poem my princess of my dreams has done the same sort of thing to me ,love is just soooooo hard to understand. Steve

Great job with the poem. I could feel the pain behind it and I can relate to what you are saying. I really the liked your rhyming in this poem. 5/5

Aww i lyked this poem it was good but sad 2 love can b crazyy thou n its hard cuz u can't control ya feelins but anyways niice poem

Wow it's so unique... fairy tail myth... wow nice one... keep the good work yo!!!

Cool

I loved this poem. . awesome.! and so true, but sad :-(