A Stranger In My Arms

by Jenni Marie   Apr 27, 2007


Once I knew who you were
Knew everything about you
Now I know next to nothing
And this leaves me feeling blue.

Used to anticipate
Being in your embrace
Now I have to admit
Barely recognize your face.

Yet still we plod along
As though nothing is wrong
Neither of wants to say the words
Neither of us can be strong.

Nostalgia for when we first met
When I'd fallen for all your charms
Now I can't help but cry
For you're a stranger in my arms.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Wow. As my father would say "that's deep." lol Wonderful job! Again only one typo:

    Now I have t admit .. to*

    Overall it was great. Again your rhyming was perfect, I noticed you like to rhyme you and blue. :) Saw that in the last poem too. Your flow went along nice.

    I only had one part that totally threw me off:

    Nostalgia.

    Lol that is a big freaking word. And I have no idea what it means. Ima look it up now. :) great job using the vocab. I always like when poem go outside the box and try to use new words.

    Overall Excellent Job!

    Magneficent

    5/5

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