Wow. As my father would say "that's deep." lol Wonderful job! Again only one typo:

Now I have t admit .. to*

Overall it was great. Again your rhyming was perfect, I noticed you like to rhyme you and blue. :) Saw that in the last poem too. Your flow went along nice.

I only had one part that totally threw me off:

Nostalgia.

Lol that is a big freaking word. And I have no idea what it means. Ima look it up now. :) great job using the vocab. I always like when poem go outside the box and try to use new words.

Overall Excellent Job!

Magneficent

5/5