Cold And Lonely (Acrostic)

by Jenni Marie   Apr 27, 2007


Constantly feeling low
Overwhelming pain
Lying awake at night
Dreading what tomorrow will bring.

Always dreaming of a better place
Nostalgia taking over her soul
Dying silently inside.

Lost her faith long ago
Overtaken by shame
Nearly drowning in confusion
Evaporated happiness
Long ago she would smile
Yearning now for a better life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Your flow was one of the best that I have seen on an acoustic poem. The emtion was clear, and strong. You did a really good job, just like you always do. keep wriiting, and I will keep reading. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. I had a great flow to it and you had great word choice. Keep up the great work:) I rated it a 5 out of 5.

  • I loved it.
    Your word choices were great and the emotion was deep.
    The flow was flawless.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

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