I loved it.
Your word choices were great and the emotion was deep.
The flow was flawless.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

I liked this poem. I had a great flow to it and you had great word choice. Keep up the great work:) I rated it a 5 out of 5.

Your flow was one of the best that I have seen on an acoustic poem. The emtion was clear, and strong. You did a really good job, just like you always do. keep wriiting, and I will keep reading. 5/5