Hey i loved ur poem cz im having the same story and its hurting me alot

This is a really cute poem. The only thing that sort of messed it up for me was the flow was kind of weird. Other than that, it's beautifully written. Keep up the great work!

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Great write and very sweet ,keep writing you have a talent.

Hunnie ur a really good poet don't stop n keep em commin iight nd thanks for your advice r u sure tht ur13???if u are u are really wish for your age on't ever let the one you love go n if ur parents say something about ow ur too young to fall in love tell them that ur never too young to find that special someone
good luck with ur poems
mandie renee