Goodbye

by Joe   Apr 27, 2007


Goodbye

Please stop this silence its
Driving me insane.
This was never meant to be.
Its outside my domain.

Take away the empty feeling
Thats splitting me in two,
Should I love him or does
my heart still beat for you?

Can I break free from this
Never-ending pain.
Or does the memory of you
Keep me torn and chained?

Shadows come around
And I feel my body sway
I watch them dance around
me as I start to shrink away.

I feel locked in a dungeon.
But its peaceful and cool.
The perfect place to die in,
Better than in a lake or a pool

I have but one word to say.
Goodbye. Goodbye as I lived
Goodbye as I die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Beautiful poem, so full of emotion and imagery...I enjoyed it. Also, excellent rhyming.
    Stay real, chin up, and take care.
    Eleni

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I like it much it , is fast easy and simple to undertand and expression very much clear!!!

    great poem , but i tell you when you love somone , you will willingy go inside the dungeon for eachother, leave some for eachother :)

    hope you dotn die , from this!!
    great 5 /5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The words you used were so unique and different. this poem was so refreshing and easy to real. for that well done.

    5/5 David

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