The words you used were so unique and different. this poem was so refreshing and easy to real. for that well done.

5/5 David

I like it much it , is fast easy and simple to undertand and expression very much clear!!!

great poem , but i tell you when you love somone , you will willingy go inside the dungeon for eachother, leave some for eachother :)

hope you dotn die , from this!!
great 5 /5

Beautiful poem, so full of emotion and imagery...I enjoyed it. Also, excellent rhyming.
Stay real, chin up, and take care.
Eleni