This is very sad to read, its well written though and very emotional xx

The same with this one, the flow was dead on, the message was very powerful and emotional, great work.. ANother 5/5
-Ally

Nice job on showing the readers how you feel. the emtions are very strong. Well written, good flow, you did a wonderful job

''How do I survive?
When he is the only thing keeping me alive? ''

I LOVE those lines!
Just beautiful.
I thought the flow was good throughout, the imagery was nicely used and I could sense the emotion behind the words.
Beautifully done.