Clouded Sunset

by HopefulxRomantic   Apr 27, 2007


His life was that of virtue, and unparalleled goodness,
No evil or contamination could stop his heart,
At least, we thought.

The slander got the best of him, eventually,
He closed up, broke down, his spirit just...
Fled.

His times of exclusivity, we all loved his actions,
His routines, most particularly his habit,
Of watching every sunset.

He wrote about each dusk, nightly,
Candied skies, glowing entities, like...
Hope.

But now without his purity, sans reasons,
Autism touched more than his mind,
He is rendered blind.

He self-demotes to his wooden chair, bitterly,
Blaming the crass, the close-minded, the...
Led.

I am his last company, in his blind respite from life,
To look after the bittersweet husk of a man,
I once knew well.

This eve he asked me a favour, desperately,
To see the sunset, to let hindsight help him...
Cope.

I walked him to the hills, by the glistening bank,
I let him know that it was the place,
He used to dream.

He looked skyward hopefully, futilely,
And gazed upon him and what he had...
Said.

"Violet nimbus clouds, on a crimson backdrop,
And a golden sun centres itself,
In her canary loneliness.

Glowing sunbeams descend, gracefully,
Tied to clouds like the noose of a heavenly...
Rope."

He had warmed hearts, and he purged tears,
Anger washed away and eroded his layers,
He could see again.

He looked around in wonderment, excitedly,
But joy turned to disappointment, and in seconds he lay...
Dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a very moving poem.
    extrodinary work, I dont often come across poems like these.
    great job.
    take care x.o.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    "He wrote about each dusk, nightly,
    Candied skies, glowing entities, like...
    Hope." This phrase brought me to tears. At that point in te poem, I had so many memories (good and bad) flowing throgh my head. This poems(like almost all your others) is very personal. I don't know how you do it! The writing format is very unique. you never fail to shock me.

  • 17 years ago

    by HopefulxRomantic

    I've had this idea for a long while. I was inspired for this by "Old Man, Old Man" by U.A. Fanthorpe, whose poets I very much admire.
    Feedback very much appreciated.
    HxR