Maybe Tomorrow Will Be Beautiful

It amazes me how you can take something as common as a headache and write it into something beautiful.

Especially loved this part:

"time slows or stops for no one
and pain is just another four letter word
so I pen my sadness through words of verse
hoping my prayers to the sweet Lord will be heard"

Absolutely breathtaking as always...Holly

Very unusual poem. It's different... The way you've written it is really good. Nice one!

I suffer with huge migraines whenever aunty Flo comes along and whenever i get really stressed. They are terrible, the flashing lights in my head, the hammer like pounding, the feeling that your head is going to implode,(less mess) the throwing up..
It's horrible.
This poem was an excellent portrayel, especially the ending as after sleeping it off, things are always better the next day =)
5/5
*Gem*

Well I have headaches ma, but not nearly as bad as you experience. THe only pain that makes me sad is when its that time of the month I get the worst backaches ever to where I am in tears. And like you described here it sucks because you want to go outside and get some fresh air and sit outside and enjoy the sunshine but the pain is so much that your body is just telling you to lay on the couch.....You experience a lot more than me so I have no room to complain but pain is not fun.....Loved this poem mom
P.S...the Lord hears you and look....even though you've had migraines he's kept you alive this long to where you have the blessing to see the sunshine still :-)

Luanne
The feelings of being alone with your pain comes through in the verse you have penned. Excellent job!

time slows or stops for no one
and pain is just another four letter word
so I pen my sadness through words of verse
hoping my prayers to the sweet Lord will be heard

~~ And maybe tomorrow will be beautiful again ~~

You will have many beautiful tomorrows.
Take care
Love Cindy