Comments : Run Through the Moonlight

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Amazing kaia!

    I love it.

    I will run through the moonlight
    I will run through the stars.
    I will run through the night sky.
    For this time is surely ours.

    lmao don't ask.

    Great job.
    Shadow Pup *Howls to the moon*

  • 17 years ago

    by lina

    Kool and very interesting poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    Beautiful. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Louis

    You used repetitions but the flow of the repeated stanza good enough that it was bearable. I think the third verse of the second stanza doesn't quite fit, it is a repetition of the first verse, and nowhere in the poem are there repeated verses in the same stanza. Pleasant nonetheless. 3/3