by Crystal Gaze
Amazing kaia! |
by lina
Kool and very interesting poem |
by Chad Picard
Beautiful. :) |
by Louis
You used repetitions but the flow of the repeated stanza good enough that it was bearable. I think the third verse of the second stanza doesn't quite fit, it is a repetition of the first verse, and nowhere in the poem are there repeated verses in the same stanza. Pleasant nonetheless. 3/3 |