Comments : I'll never tell (Senryu)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhhh so pretty!
    Usually, haikus are about nature, so this made a refreshing change.
    This was elegant, and brought a smile to my face.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Oo Sorry sweets. This is a Senryu
    Written the same way as a haiku but if it's not about nature it's not a haiku, it's a senyru
    Cute all the same =)
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    Awww such a cute poem! short but touching... thanks for your comment on my poem, it means alot. love maddy xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    Its simple and short, but is written beautifully.