Awww. this poem had me crying and not many poems make me cry. there is so much to say about it. how emotional it is and how very straight from your heart it sounds. yet you still manage to get the flow going so well and catch the reader into the life of the poem. its so very sad. a lot of good skill in here. please write more i will keep an eye on your work now xxx

Oh well done with this poem. it was excellent. the description and emotion thru out this poem was stunning!

5/5 david

I absolutely love this poem jenna, the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5 as always, keep up the good work, love your poems!!!!