The Thorn of the Storm

by KeyxMashingxParody   Apr 27, 2007


As I watch the rain fall,
I feel my eyes swell.
Tears slow in their tracks,
And all is coming well.

As I see the lightning strike,
I feel the pain again.
Pricking my spine,
From beginning to end.

As I hear the thunder roar,
My ears begin to burn.
Full of screams and bruises,
Full of what I've earned.

As I touch the cold glass,
I rest where you had once lain.
Staring at deep cracks,
On my white window pane.

As I study each tree,
Bug, bush, and plant.
My thoughts begin to scramble,
Over each scar on my wrist and hands.

As I lay here tonight,
Beaten like a storm...
I forgive you for everything,
For every rose has a thorn.

-Liz-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I agree with Tyanna, I am speachless, it was dead on, my favorite stanza was...

    "As I hear the thunder roar,
    My ears begin to burn.
    Full of screams and bruises,
    Full of what I've earned. "

    But it was all good. lol... Very powerful message, great flow. Just all and all a wonderful work of art, keep it up.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    I love the first stanza!! This poem was dead on!! The wording, flow, rhyming..everything was perfect! Amazing write!!!! I'm speachless! No complaints on this one! 5/5
    Tyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Awesome, magnificent, stupendous. i especially liked your imagery on pricking spines and burning ears. keep up the good work.

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I loved it.
    It flowed well and the emotion was deep.

    'As I lay here tonight,
    Beaten like a storm...
    I forgive you for everything,
    For every rose has a thorn.'

    I loved this stanza.

    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

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