I loved it.
It flowed well and the emotion was deep.

'As I lay here tonight,
Beaten like a storm...
I forgive you for everything,
For every rose has a thorn.'

I loved this stanza.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Awesome, magnificent, stupendous. i especially liked your imagery on pricking spines and burning ears. keep up the good work.

your servant:
david

I love the first stanza!! This poem was dead on!! The wording, flow, rhyming..everything was perfect! Amazing write!!!! I'm speachless! No complaints on this one! 5/5
Tyanna

I agree with Tyanna, I am speachless, it was dead on, my favorite stanza was...

"As I hear the thunder roar,
My ears begin to burn.
Full of screams and bruises,
Full of what I've earned. "

But it was all good. lol... Very powerful message, great flow. Just all and all a wonderful work of art, keep it up.
-Ally