The days

by Chelsea   Apr 28, 2007


The words I say wont change you
the tears I cry wont help
the days I pray might ease the pain
but theres the days when I wait.

The days where I am alone
crying for you to be here
the days when no one sees
that your the person I need.

The days when life isnt right
and your the one I need by my side
the days when I try to see you
all you do is lie and say i tried.

The days where you dont phone
and I wait to here a ' i love you '
the days when I fear your going to be gone
and I just sit here waiting for you.

The words I say wont change you
the tears I cry wont help
the days I pray might ease the pain
but theres the days when I wait.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    That has got to be my favorite poem by you! =] The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear and strong, & the word usage was great.

    "The words I say wont change you
    the tears I cry wont help
    the days I pray might ease the pain
    but theres the days when I wait."

    ^ Oh, boy - oh - boy! I flippin love that stanza! I truly do. =] 5.5

    - Stephanie Lynn .+. (Your personal bi-ch.)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    That had a fantastic rhythm that really helped the poem along, the bittersweet words were shining through the screen, touching the heart
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey...it's beautifully penned..just luv it...
    kp writing..
    tk care
    ~puja~

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I relate to this at the moment, well done i think you have a good poem here and i like the start and end being the same xxx

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