I relate to this at the moment, well done i think you have a good poem here and i like the start and end being the same xxx

Hey...it's beautifully penned..just luv it...
kp writing..
tk care
~puja~

That had a fantastic rhythm that really helped the poem along, the bittersweet words were shining through the screen, touching the heart
5/5
*Gem*

Wow.
That has got to be my favorite poem by you! =] The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear and strong, & the word usage was great.

"The words I say wont change you
the tears I cry wont help
the days I pray might ease the pain
but theres the days when I wait."

^ Oh, boy - oh - boy! I flippin love that stanza! I truly do. =] 5.5

- Stephanie Lynn .+. (Your personal bi-ch.)