Your love is shining in this piece. Great job!

She laughs like she's never laughed before.
She's so happy now.
He makes her feel this way.

"Take one look, and you'll see, the love in her eyes."

This is quite delightful to read. I like it, really, specially the line I aforementioned. Two lovers speak a thousand things through staring at each other's eyes without uttering anything at all...
Very, very nice.

Thnx for all ur comments

This is a really good poem.
exactly what i feel.
take a look at mine sometime.
5/5

ps
my name is also tia lol