The kiss [Acrostic]
by Infected with His Deadly Love Apr 28, 2007
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Trembling lips |
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17 years ago
by Startle Me
No wonder I chose this as my winner.
It is fabulous :]
From something simple as acrostic.
You made it into something I just could not forget.
Sometimes I found myself saying the words
Out loud.
It was a bit ludacris, but funny all in all.
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17 years ago
by Vanessa
The words fit togather very well. You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work. The Imagery was great, and the words well chosen 5/5
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17 years ago
by Faded
Very good job, i usually dont like acroustic poems, but this one was pretty good,
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17 years ago
by Kelsea
Its sweet :]. I don't really know how much I can say about this one-its really hard to change an acrostic poem, obviously. But, It is better than any acrostic I have ever done XD Good job
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17 years ago
by LadyPearl
The first stanza started off the poem in a enchanting way. But the rain part just hits right on the mark. Wonderful job!
