Thoughts

by LaLa   Apr 28, 2007


Staring into the array of colors
not knowing whether its black or white
trying hard not to cry
putting up a desperate fight
grabbing onto imaginary things
not knowing-or caring
about all of the pain that it brings
screaming out your name
but you don't seem to be there
but who am i trying to fool?
you never are; you don't care
tears streaming down
hatred starting to arise
but i hold it back
i say i love you; but you wont say it back
i cant even fake a smile; i only frown
emptiness-thats all i feel
numb and emotionless
i thought you were different
i thought you were true
but baby why don't you love me;
just as much as i love you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sami Cakes

    I like it sis but its a 5/5
    She is right you spelled words wrong but I cant spell either
    ttyl'

  • 17 years ago

    by Sami Cakes

    I like it sis but its a 5/5
    She is right you spelled words wrong but I cant spell either
    ttyl'

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I think on the first line
    You spelled staring wrong.
    The thing you spelt out sounds like
    Star-ring.
    You're trying to say stare-ring, right?
    But still.
    This is an awesome poem.
    I wish I could give any other advise on it.
    But I like this poem too much
    And don't want anything dramatic to change.
    Other than that.
    5/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber

    This is really good :)