by ImNotPerfect20 Apr 28, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
There is this guy who sings |
Wow very different. But i liked the way you got your point across. Lacking flow but this you already know and besides flow doesn't make the poem, the writers creativity does so well done. 5/5 |
Wow this was extremely different, Im really not used to your style of writing but its a bit refreshing some times. Very interesting topic to write about.. I'm gonna give this a 3/5 cause the topic was so original but I cant give it any higher because the flow threw if off for me and made it very hard for me to stay in the moment of your poem, but if thats what you like then more power to you for going against the norm. |
by Vanessa
It was definalty diffrent in a good way of course. I loved it. I am not sure what else to say. I guess this will be the shortes comment you ever got from me, but anyway 5/5 |
This wasn't the best piece of poetry I've ever read from you. I like the passion you have for this singer (I remember him... he was a pretty nice vocalist) but you could have put so much more of that into your poem. Decent work, though. |
Haha, I've never read a poem like this. But I like it. It's hard to write a poem about a tv show, but you pulled it off. |