Disgusted Luck

by Seronum   Apr 28, 2007


My Luck within life has been shallow.
I cant seem to escape the hate.
depression of an innocent tomorrow,
comprehension is too far away.
If it would've been someone else,
it probably would've passed.
But now I stand with guilt inside.
My luck could never last.
A joke or two of something new,
the rest could do it all.
but now I'm a fallen man inside.
I see them begin to fall.
But thats my luck and I could care less
what anyone thinks of me.
Either way I'm still disgraced.
From the luck i have yet to see.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    You're soo talented! I love this poem! Will ou please comment on mine!?

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Just one thing in this poem you spelt one word wrong in this im sure its just a simple mistake but in the 5th line change the word to "else" =] none the less though a nicely written poem well done here. Good flow great vocab. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You seem like bored about life..i understand you cos world is being more miserable day to day
    But everytime there is something that keeps you carry on
    I hope you look around and find that thing to hold on to life
    The poem was excellent
    Keep it up
    Laura

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