I liked this very much. I thought you chose the right words for everything you had to say. it was a nice story....sad && sweet.
good work, i look forward to reading more of it.
<3
L.C
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I loved this one.. the way u tell a story through a poem is amazing. i wish i could write like u. ur talented. keep it up 5/5

Love this poem 5/5 u hav so much talent, i love how u worded this poem, great work
xx love