You're soo talented! I love this poem! Will ou please comment on mine!?

This is real good work i dont think i have read any of your work before but this is really good hunkeep it up :D

xxx alex xxx

This is a very good poem. I liked the style of ur writing. Good work!

Beautifully written, kept my intrest all the way though it, the word choice was excellent, and the flow was amazing, well penned. 5/5

The fact that this piece can be interpreted in different ways possible is quite enchanting. I took it as a certain family feud and also a battle between 'good' and 'evil' within the mind - especially the last stanza. On the whole, it rather is a poignant piece. =] Keep on writing. all the best and take care. 5/5 ~Marian

All th way this poem is great. The only place you could revise could be "They claim to like you, love you." this line. I mean like" They claim to like and love you", but in anyway its beautiful. This is the only place I thought for a while. SO you can imagine how well written is this piece. ALL the way 5/5.

Tc with love
Fsams

Very well vocalized

The last stanza sucks compared to the rest of the poem. I REALLY don't mean to be mean or anything, but it did. The rest flowed WONDERFULLY and was awesome, I really got your message, but the last four lines threw it all off. The rest is spectacular.

The rhyme scheme was off at times, but other than that I really liked the message and though the piece flowed very well. 4/5

~queenofspades~