by doug frazier Apr 28, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
relationships
I reached out one night to grab a star, like a fool I took her home. |
Lol i just found this poem I really liked it there was something about the way that you described her as the wolf when in actuality she was a real person, I liked that idea. I liked the message at the end of this peice. The only critism that I have is some of the rhymes sounded really forced and took away from the uniqueness of your poem. Other than that it was amazing. |
by doug frazier
Thank you dear for your kind comments, glad I could tickle your funny bone. I don't go for the bar scene myself, but I did for just a time or two. I still bare the scars from the lessons learned. I hope it's not a full moon, you might need the fangs. Thanks again doll! |