Comments : She wolf

  • 17 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Thank you dear for your kind comments, glad I could tickle your funny bone. I don't go for the bar scene myself, but I did for just a time or two. I still bare the scars from the lessons learned. I hope it's not a full moon, you might need the fangs. Thanks again doll!
    Doug

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Lol i just found this poem I really liked it there was something about the way that you described her as the wolf when in actuality she was a real person, I liked that idea. I liked the message at the end of this peice. The only critism that I have is some of the rhymes sounded really forced and took away from the uniqueness of your poem. Other than that it was amazing.