by aDORKable x3 Apr 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
For You, I'd travel the world, |
by Milo
An amazing poem. I love this poem so much because the imagination with grasp of emotions with it. really really really amazing keep it up. |
by Jenni Marie
Ohhhh I loved this! |
OMG Ciao!! That poem is amazing!!! How sweet!! Ray huh? Huh? *nudges with elbow* lol, awwwww.. It's so sweet Ciao!! It's awesome, flow and ryhming and everything is spectualar as always!! 5/5 for SURE!!! <3 |
by Bryan
Another great poem from you ciao, the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!! |
Wow, quite refreshing to read a love poem such as this Darling, I love your work. It wasn't a typical cliched one, and you put your heart into it, which I could tell..only one thing.. "hole" did you mean "hold"? In the last stanza. But great job Hunny! |