Wow, quite refreshing to read a love poem such as this Darling, I love your work. It wasn't a typical cliched one, and you put your heart into it, which I could tell..only one thing.. "hole" did you mean "hold"? In the last stanza. But great job Hunny!

heartchuu. 5.5

Another great poem from you ciao, the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

OMG Ciao!! That poem is amazing!!! How sweet!! Ray huh? Huh? *nudges with elbow* lol, awwwww.. It's so sweet Ciao!! It's awesome, flow and ryhming and everything is spectualar as always!! 5/5 for SURE!!! <3

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Ohhhh I loved this!
This was just so sweet, and I was smiling the whole time I was reading it.
The imagery was wonderfully done, really created pretty pictures in my mind, the flow was beautiful throughout and the poem was a joy to read!

An amazing poem. I love this poem so much because the imagination with grasp of emotions with it. really really really amazing keep it up.