Gr8 poem...it actually made me cry...5/5

This was a really good poem, the rhymes seemed a bit forced and the structure was weird, but it was still a great write. I'm not sure if this was sad enough to make me cry, but it was sad..

Wow, not what I had expected from the title, far better than what I had expected! Your writing reminds me of songs by bands like Cute Is What We Aim For...if you haven't heard them I suggest you look them up, you may find some inspiration in their lyrics. =] I really enjoyed this poem, it held a lot of depth and feeling to it while allowing outsiders to relate to your words as well...something not a lot of writers on here are able to do. Kudos on that. =]

"Enrage and
Disengage. Then
count the days till I
meet the legal drinking age."

^^ Those lines were amazing. ^_^

5.5
<3