Elapse My Love

by LostLikeTearsInRain   Apr 28, 2007


As I lay dying
Wondering when this pain will end
Hoping for a sign to tell me
When it's safe to love again

I see your face upon the horizon
The way you glide with one foot in front of the other
Strengthens my belief that you're an angel
And I never want to love another

Yet, I know you aren't mine
So a single tear escapes my eye
But I want to be tough in your heart
So I don't let you see me cry

I hold you up
With the utmost respect
I considered our love invincible
Nothing we'd have to perfect

That no longer seems logical
You are now out of my grasp
And all I can do is watch
As love and pain elapse

---------------------------------To P.G.-------------------------------

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sinkaku

    5/5. Touche. You put into words what I can't even fathom on how to begin to write about. I hope things go well with you and yours.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautiful sad poem Kevin...I really like the opening lines...

    As I lay dying
    Wondering when this pain will end
    Hoping for a sign to tell me
    When it's safe to love again

    The whole piece is well written...emotional, good flow and rhyming....5/5 from me! All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    As I lay dying
    Wondering when this pain will end
    Hoping for a sign to tell me
    When it's safe to love again
    ___

    Love how you started this off. This was a great poem...sad but beautiful. I can relate to it so much. And I love the last stanza. Exccellent write. Keep strong! Take care.

    ` Liz =]
    5/5

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