As I lay dying
Wondering when this pain will end
Hoping for a sign to tell me
When it's safe to love again
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Love how you started this off. This was a great poem...sad but beautiful. I can relate to it so much. And I love the last stanza. Exccellent write. Keep strong! Take care.

` Liz =]
5/5

Very beautiful sad poem Kevin...I really like the opening lines...

As I lay dying
Wondering when this pain will end
Hoping for a sign to tell me
When it's safe to love again

The whole piece is well written...emotional, good flow and rhyming....5/5 from me! All the best, Debbie

5/5. Touche. You put into words what I can't even fathom on how to begin to write about. I hope things go well with you and yours.