Wow, that was very sad. The flow was great, great use of words. Loved it, 5/5

Very good, I like it a lot. I like how you made this sad poem into a little story, but more importantly the meaning and emotions it brings out.....GP

This is great...i really liked it im not sure why but i ind it reallly good

It's a beautifully penned slightly story-ish sortof poem..i liked it anyways!......greatl use of words...kp writing!
T k care!
xxPoojaxx

Aww that is so sad ans a nice poem at the same time

This is a great poem. i really like it.

Hoorayy colby gets an A!