by Imani Apr 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Pain |
by MaSkEdSoUl
This ones really good, I like the structure of it and the flow was good. On line 14 scene should be sense and maybe take off the word 'my'? well thats all I got. Great poem. |
by Tara
Hey thats really goodi can relate to tht in so many way |