Sweet i found the first stanza really ahrd to understand though lol good job anyways xxx alex xxx

Ahaaa aftr long time, but as good as always...
5/5

God bless u

Very nice poem. There is someone in your life for you. Great job!

A dream girl for my life
Somewhere is in the earth
My eyes try to capture her face
Hope one day she will come in my life

She will cone :)
Take Care Cindy

Wow that was amazing. Keep it up, 5/5
Sara

I really enjoyed this poem alot, For such a short piece of poetry the emotions were portrayed beautifully and strong. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

Awww thats sweet.. very nice poem.. short but sweet.. keep it up =] and thanks for the comment.

Very nice work, i'm sure she is out there somewhere! keep up the good work!
God Bless

I can't say anything wow man
you are so talented am note joking

keep on doing what you doing :):):):)...

I love it >>>>>>:):):)

gooooood worc thou

Realli good. 5/5
thanx for the comment on my poem.
manda

My Dear Excellent work and a good flow of poem.... I enjoyed and love it. ....:) 5/5

Dream girl of yours.. It is nice to think and wait is there this special guy/girl somewhere out there waiting for us..

Sometimes people's dream are unrealistic.. Some people's dream girl is just a girl who could show some love..

This poem is sweet..romantic love poem.. :)