Short but effective i really like the way that it was based on your culture. keep up the good work xxx alex xxx

That was cool how it was based on your culture^ I really liked the poem, I have never read anything like it...

This, to me, sounded like it could very well be like a national anthem type thing. Very well written with descriptive words and good imagery! Well done! Keep it up! <3

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Very nice.5/5