The flow could use some work, but the topic was good, and emotion full. 4/5 girl. nice job

Wow that's pretty good..but does that have to do with what's been going on...or u made it up? just wondering?!

Oh!!!!.......beautiful!..just a lot better cz of the way it's filled wth emotions.....not sure abt the flow....but i think it's a pretty nice job!.
Tk care
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