I like it, I have a poem thats like this but way different, but like the same meaning. Okay on some lines you need to fix them like

On the first line I think you should write "She sits (with an s) home alone"

Line 5 you should probably say 'problems she has'

Line 9 does would sound better than do

And in some lines you have two different subjects like on this one: "she got problems so whats that got to do with her being alone" You should have it

She got problems,
So whats that got to do with her being alone?

Like that but other than that it was great, I got the whole point of it.