Wow i really like that :) good job 5/5 |
by Sweet lig
What a fabulous work... nice and very creative. |
by Sara
That was soo good!!.. i loved how it was all about living for today and i believe so much in that.. you should always live each day to the fullest... the flow was great!! 5/5 from me, and thanks so much for the comment, i really appreciate it! |
This makes you think.. what would it be like if we only lived a day? idk. hmm.. good topic.. Very intresting.. i like this peom its very deep. 5/5 |
by TracyM
Wow. so beautifully written. i love it. its a poem that really stands out and gets you to think. good choice of words. very good. |
by Live WeLL
What a great poem.. excellent job.. and very nicely written.. it was short but to the point which is great.. nice topic too..living only for today.. well done.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =] |