Reflection(edited)

by Mousie   Apr 28, 2007


Walks past a window
Looks at the image she casts,
Goes out for a jog
Runs extremely fast.

Discouraged by her shadow
And afraid of what will come,
She looms in clouds of darkness
Acceptance she has none.

Muffled cries of terror
Hidden by her smile,
Patronized by one's who love
Agony's denial.

She looks into the pond
Made by sorrowful tears,
Unhappy of the face she sees
Reflection of her fears.

i dunno got an idea, it's ok i guess, hope you like it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Absoultly wonderful. again the word choice brought this poem to life. The flow is fantastic, and the emtion was really strong. Good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherise

    Wow, and this just came to you? :O this was awsome, i can't help but feell that i relate to it almost. The flow was amazing, Well pened, keep it up :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow dear,
    it is so great to write another great one by my favorite poet...........keep it up

    by the way, i wrote a poem dedicated to you which i will post soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elyse

    Wow that was really....wow

  • 17 years ago

    by behindxthextears

    I really liked it :)

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