Caleb Scott(Acrostic)

by BeautifulxMess   Apr 28, 2007


Careless human-made being, that I love with my all.
Anything he wants done, I'd do it in a heartbeat for him.
Laying upon his manly chest that sends me into a bliss.
Eyes that shine with green luster that sprouts after fall.
Beyond the world he's more than just a thousand words.

Skin soft as silk touches every inch of me that shakes.
Compassion burns in his heart that he loves me with.
Over everything he does, loving is his greatest gift.
Taking my heart into his hand that will never let it break
The world is nothing and bleak without my Caleb Scott.

*Caleb is my boyfriend's first name, Scott is his middle name. I didn't felt so comfortable putting his whole name on here.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Aww, this is so sweet, this is how i feel about my babe =]

  • 17 years ago

    by AmorousObsession

    I love your writing please read my poems "I WISH" and some featured poems you might like im a big love poet

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    Aww. this is so cute. i love it when i feel that way about a guy! it was an awesome poem.
    a true expression of love!
    great job
    i give it 5/5!
    keep it up!
    and i read the thing about you on your profile.. im kinda like you.. hehe :) i like what you said. life should be good, we gotta make the most of it.. well anyways ... haha GREAT POEM! loved it! :)
    xoxo
    mEgAN**

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this one.. I could feel all of your happiness. Its wonderful when you find someone who makes you feel that way. I liked the word choices, and there is nothing that I can critique on.. srry. Nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    Wonderfully written. My only suggestion would be to use stronger vocabulary and diction. 4/5

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