by Chad Picard Apr 28, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I face you |
by AlaSkA
Gettin mid evil i see. good write sir. (; |
by Perfection
This was a pretty well writen poem and it had an interesting story.. however the two last lines were PERFECT... the way you end this whith that comment was outstanding... |
by TracyM
Well chosen words, and good structure. is certainly different from others i have read. good read. |
by Chad Picard
I'm not absolutely certain that this is sufficiently "violence-free" I don't personally see it as violent, per say. Rather, my intent with this piece was/is to express the sadness/regret conflict creates, even on the part of the 'victors.' |