I'm not absolutely certain that this is sufficiently "violence-free" I don't personally see it as violent, per say. Rather, my intent with this piece was/is to express the sadness/regret conflict creates, even on the part of the 'victors.'

Well chosen words, and good structure. is certainly different from others i have read. good read.

This was a pretty well writen poem and it had an interesting story.. however the two last lines were PERFECT... the way you end this whith that comment was outstanding...

I will se what else you have =)

Gettin mid evil i see. good write sir. (;