Tears.

by carissalynn   Apr 28, 2007


Secrets.
So many,
the agony of them
is too great to keep inside.
its somthing i shouldnt
tell you,
but i have to,
because my own being
cannot take it alone.

Secrets.
Their tearing me
from the inside,
out.
Ruining my identity.
I try to cry,
but nothing happens.
Tears will not come to my rescue,
not this time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaetaj

    I think this poem should be called secrets because you mention that word frequently...

  • 17 years ago

    by dawn

    Thanks for your comment. I love this poem. It has incredible depth. Your a really good writer. Keep it up Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    This is really good.
    I'm honestly not sure what I like about it, but it just.. Hits me.
    And it's good.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    I can't even begin to tell you how true that is! This is really good >.< 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucy D1am0nd

    Wow thats really amazing. thats how I feel right now. I'm so upset but I cant bring myself to cry. *5*

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