by BeautifulxMess Apr 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Hearts will break; Eyes will cry. |
The grammar was really well used in this poem, i lovhe way the stanzas are layed out and the meaning also is so powerful. good job |
I liked the form of this poem, how it went from "normal" stanzas to couplets. |
by Startle Me
This doesn't really make any sense to me |
by Synh
I wasn't very fond of this poem because you never say what will make someone stronger throughout the pain and anguish they'll go through. You have many grammar and spelling mistakes as well; please edit your poems before you post them. |