Fading Light

by The DaveJon   Apr 29, 2007


A broken night
A tear through the dark sky
A soul screaming not right
A star beginning to die

A waning moon
Limbs of broken trees
A sense of impending doom
Why can't the soul see?

A cold wind moan
Raging clouds that rear
A shadow alone in his zone
Drowning in his tears

The stinging drops of rain
Cooling the heated head
His spirit overwhelmed with pain
Wishing to be dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    So sad... so very sad

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Dave,

    This short poem has such a huge amount of sadness in it. It's an awesome write. It flows off the tounge and into the soul. The sadness here... it speaks deeply. Awesome write. 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

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