Anger and Hate (Acoustic)

Oh whoa! this was very dramatic. it was excellent. i loved how it ended so strongly. that always impresses me. a strong ending. and this poem showed that.

well done and keep writing. 5/5 David

Wow this is amazing. i really liked it a lot. you did a wonderful job writing this. it was sad, but greatly written 5/5

~Kristina

*Acrostic*
You spelled it wrong. Well, these aren't easy to do. You did a good job on it. The flow was a bit shaky, and the rhymed seemed a bit foreced. Keep up the work! God bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^

Aww poor thing I can relate to this one it's really good and I loved it very nice imagery and emotion

Perhaps not as good as some of your other work but still a good write oyu have a skill that i rarely see on this website.

xxx alex xxx