Thanks a lot . . . . DAD

by TaNyabAbEE   Apr 29, 2007


There's always a girl,
who stands by herself.
Inside she feels alone,
she feels so helpless.

If someone would like her,
she'd think it a dare.
She can't ever believe,
that someone might care.

She always hides behind,
her sarcastic mask.
She never shows emotion,
people know not to ask.

She is so scared,
that she'll fall in love.
By falling in love, she could be abused,
she'd be bruised, pushed & shoved.

Caring for anyone is hard,
because of that man.
He took away her trusting,
when he raised her hand.

Of everything I missed,
relationships never had.
I look back now & say,
"Thanks a lot . . . . DAD"

Based on a true story, my biological dad abused my mom, and becuz of that, I have a really hard time trusting people. Especially guys. please let me know what you think of this, it would mean a lot to me if you would comment, with advice or suggestions. Thanks:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    I like this poem, i think it was very nice. and as far as the true story goes, i'm sorry that that happened to you and i hope one day a man comes along who can show you what love really is and can show you that even tho some guys are true @ssholes, not all guys are.
    but i likes your poem, very nice hun.
    <3
    L.C
    *plz comment my work it would be greatly appreciated*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tempest

    Wow I can really relate, I was abused so I have a hard time trusting people especially guys, My mom was never abused but I was This had a lot of emotion in it I really like it 5/5